wow. i didn't expect the ending. It was kind of confusing in a couple of parts. But other than that it was a great short story.

*SW*

Thank you for your review on 'The Riders of EBony' ch.2...i can't wait to finish ch.3 so you can see what happens! heehee

Aww, that is a beautiful ending. Rest of it was extremely harsh, poor Dryssa, but at least shes got her real dad now

*gasp* uve started a new story! this is really intriguing, and is there gonna be other chaps? or is she gonna die and liv her life among the angels and the story ending there? awesome job on this!

wonderful wonderful story...simple but touching in many ways...fantastic job!:)