"i won't compare this love to lifefor it transcends understandingand it lasts longer."

Very nice, sweet, in fact.. I enjoyed this one to the maximum as well.. Keep it up!

-Lav

well i agree it is a different kind of love poem but i like it i love how you say you will not compare it bc love is hard to compare and even if you compare it and it comes close it still isn't a right comparison. Great job Good Luck in the future

... breathing-talking.
This is very brilliant stuff, I'm almost taken aback by the intensity of it. Very Shakespearian.