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elite 2005-08-20 ch 1, anon.	abusestory is OK but your grammer is absolutly horrible, at least half of the sentences don't really work. You need to work on your use of commas and other punctuation.
cassis 2005-01-08 ch 1, anon.	abuseim doing this because you said to. i already told you my idea so there! but it was good. and i hope you can continue soon. ^-^