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| Never.Catch.Tomorrow 2007-11-06 ch 1, | abuseI really like this piece, especially the last lines, and I totally agree. I had a professor last semester that spent more time bashing Americans than actually teaching the material. She works on AIDS research in Africa and would always say how much she loved it there and it was so much better than America. So why doesn't she move there? I have no idea. Yeah, it's annoying. |
| ree 2007-09-19 ch 1, anon. | abusevery patriotic and very powerful. |
| =) 2007-03-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseoh last two lines were really good and I loved how you said that america is like an idea... yeah this just really fit my mood because my mom's listening to the news in the background and they litterally just slipped in something like that. *nods* yes, they live here too amazingly and i think they should have to read this. hehe so good job =D && have a good weekend!(or really really end of weekend i think there's like an hour left until monday *cries*) |
| thats.the.beauty.of.it 2006-07-26 ch 1, | abuseI'm usually not a fan of poetry but i liked this. I completely agree with it |
| Striped Leopard 2006-06-15 ch 1, | abuseGo you! |
| Girl-Predictable 2006-01-25 ch 1, | abuseI don't hate America. I hate humanity. Personally, I think we should all jump off a cliff. Why don't I do the same? Because I'm human. :D |
| BeccaBoo14 2006-01-02 ch 1, | abuseI'll admit it, I'm a self hating American... Well really, I have this thing against labeling land... Yeah, I'm pretty bad. I'm a politic-hater. And practically everything is based on politics... so yeah... I hate practically everything, lol. Not really... I mean... yeah. I'm bad at explaining myself. Yes, I hate America. No, I don't hate it's people. It's... hard to explain... It's like how I hate say... England or Germany or South America or Austrailia or China... It's the government kinda thing really... egh, I strongly dislike it all, so I promptly ignore it and move on with my life... unlike some of my friends... :-/ - Bleh... I sound like my mom, lol. |
| Querry 2005-10-29 ch 1, | abuseThat is a really nice poem. i hadn't thought about things like that before. i'm one of the people who 'wanted' to move to Canada when Bush was reelected, but now i think i share your view. however, i think that those of us who dissagree with American ideals cannot do all that much untill there are more of us, and in order for there to be more of us, America needs to make a bigger mistake than reelecting Bush (sorry, and you a republican?) and i'm not so sue if that would be such a great thing...i don't know what i'm saying any more, so i'll stop... |
| dotcult 2005-10-25 ch 1, | abuseOH MY GOSH~ *touched* goodness that was sweet and i feel the same way. i think i'll copy you and write a poem about it. thanks for the inspiration. |
| shay 2005-10-13 ch 1, anon. | abusevery good! i'm with you on this one! |
| Grape 2005-09-17 ch 1, | abuseAmen to that!! I agree, it is completly horrid the way people are complaining about the way America is run, and that ANY place is better then here, well they might as well get out of here if somewhere else is better! Anyways..GREAT! I loved it and am behind you 110% |
| Winged Shadow 2005-09-10 ch 1, | abuseHey, great poem. I, personally, hate American government(I don't live there, though), but I get kind of sick of everyone I know going on about stupid Americans when really it's just the government that sucks. So, yeah, I really liked the poem, it's pretty good. Hope America turns good again! |
| dancingintherain 2005-08-02 ch 1, | abusewow. |
| La Bonne Mascarade 2004-09-26 ch 1, | abuseHannie, you moo monkey. This is an ok poem, i guess, i love the part where your like, i say, i feel, i think, i believe, but... until it is what it should be, america does not make me happy. And if you want, ill agree that when i say i dont like america, i really mean the policies and government, not the actual country. Anyways... thanks for putting up the poems tho. |
| ByFireAndMoonlight 2004-09-26 ch 1, | abuseThis is really good! I agree with you, good job! ^_^ |