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| Pont 2004-11-16 ch 1,  | abuseThat's so cool! I like it! Nice change in point of view near the end, and I love how you formatted the writing. Very descriptive. ~pont |
| marean 2004-11-07 ch 1, anon. | abusei love it!! |
| marean 2004-11-07 ch 1, anon. | abusei love it!! |
| Earthsong12 2004-09-27 ch 1, | abuseI like it! It;'s very well written. It's so sad, the "they laughed as I cried" bit. I like the formatting too, the indents show the feeling nicely. One thing I didn't get, is in the end she just says "okay" and agrees with them. You' think there'd be some anger at them, for laughing at her. ah well. *shrug* Okay, just me being stupid: Is the last line mtaphorical or is she really a tree? I can read it either way. |
| JoseJavi 2004-09-26 ch 1, | abuseGreat poem. I'm adding it to my faves list. Perfect ending, I love this kind of poems because you don't really understand it until the end. |
| ByFireAndMoonlight 2004-09-26 ch 1, | abuseThis is good, and if there were mistakes I didn't notice them, though thats probally because I'm not quite smart enought to. *shrugs* oh well. Good job! |