hang on, it rhymes! but it doesn't bother me, while most rhyming does. Congratulations lol. good poem, though it's lacking punctuation.

Mhm, I feel you. It's really only those moments that speak to you, the rest of the time they're interupted. Very blunt and simple. Love it!

The winds not blowing..wind's
wow.. awesome descriptions.. it flows beautifully