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| rainbowskye 2004-09-27 ch 1,  | abuseThis is a good start, I think that you conveyed the emotion well, which makes it something that you can enjoy reading. Can't wait for more. |
| LightYourPath 2004-09-26 ch 1, | abuseI think that was the most sweetest thing I've read in a while. I can really feel his desperation. Maybe it's because I can relate to this experience. :p I hope you update soon! This is going into my favorite stories list. :D |