It was so cute how he never wanted to hit Flash in the face :) funny story, good job.

I can honestly say, this is probably one of the most entertaining
slash stories I've read in a long time. I love how you went back and forth between the two viewpoints, each time with a different injury, and how the friends served as the main bridges between the two. Very well-written, very creative. I'd love to see this have a sequel, or even turn into a series. I had never even thought of a premise like this before. Bravo!

-PJ Kitty

he he he nice ending ... doesn't it have more? *looking with pleading eyes*

very clever

I love this. My god. I have this saved too.

I totally laughed at how they flirt :D

Now that is some sexual frustration!

Ha ha ha! This is one crazy great story. It's relatively short, yet nicely written. I was laughing all throughout the action scenes.

Amusing. I love reading about the damange they did; it really cracked me up ... ^^ And I love the parts with them asking 'What were you thinking?' LOL. Toby and Nathan seem so cute, even though they were minor characters. x]

;] That was really cute. I wish there was more though; you totally could've made a full length story. Anyway, good job. It was very entertaining.

Kudos, Rykaine, on your utterly awesome story. I love a good slash—especially one where rivalry turns to romance. The last 'round' was pure genius. Great job! -meijing-

Wow... I absolutely love this! ^^ To be truthfully I read "Something to Talk About" way back when if first came out and loved that too but didn't review *flushes guiltily* Now, of course, I feel bad that you're not getting the attention you deserve (as in reviews), ergo my review! I also hope that you will continue to write more wonderful stories/one-shots, because your first two (here anyways) were *great*! ^_~
~Warui Warui Neko

I LOVE THIS
I DO
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Brilliant!