Hmm... sounds good, so far. The only thing that concerns me is you haven't updated since September, and it's November now. I dunno, maybe you're just busy. Who knows? Either way, this looks like it might be aight, but until you update and provide me, the viewer, with more chapters, I won't say any more, mostly because I can't, but also because I've forgotten what I was gonna say :P. Kinda ruined the effect, too. :S

Oh, this sounds really interesting so far! Really interesting! It's sort of fantasy but real at the same time.. I like that a lot! And I love the concept of being able to dream things and they happen and the title's great as well! Good start; I can't wait to see more!