This was pretty cool! It's good that Robinson Crusoe could see the humanity in Friday that others couldn't! I know more about that story now than I ever have (I've never read it)! That was really good! Keep it up!
Essays...ARRH! I don't like writing essays, my teachers always want them so long. In year 5 I had to write a 15 page one on rivers, it was so boring...
Anyway, this is quite good, and I hope you got a good mark for it.