Wow... I could really relate... I love how you wrote this, I could really feel the sadness of the piece. Great. :)

>>Shanice

you are a really talented poet. your poem was perfect and the rhythm was excellent and the words were great. awesome!

SP

this is very dark and passionate. you are a great poet and this poem speaks to me. i am interested in poetry and this is so great. i mean wow it is like you wrote down how i feel, this is a great peom and i can't wait to read more of them.

I told you sistah, you rock! Love your angst-y writings! The feeling is ... very ... AH! I'm lost for words! REALLY! Wonderful atistic writing!