powerful and beautiful at the same time. great poem, greatER poet. ^_^

SP

You say you suck, but you don't. You're one of the best for me. You're too humble, even if your poetry is deep and beautiful. (General review)

Very nice. The rhythm is perfect, and I like the repeated lines. My poetry is crap compared to this.

Charry! I was so ... disturbed by the poem! Where is my carefree sistah? Huh? Anyways! Wonderful poetry dearie! I loved it. The sequence, the words, the feelings, the expressions ... priceless! You rock! Kudos to you! ^^ But get me a funny one!

good poem, though i dont like to stand naked... any way keep writing!