A lot of these remind me of myself. Great poem.

Very deep, if its true, which it does seem like. It's good to identify your weaknesses; if it helped make you realise how to feel better about yourself, well done. You accomplished a feat I couldn't have done even if I tried. If this poem had been depressing all the way through, like how it started, I probably wouldn't have reviewed. Keep up the hope, and keep writing, because you're damn good at it, I say!