Very nice. It gives a pleasant impression of what the ocean, in my opinion best represents. This sort of vast, emptiness on its surface and the teeming mysteries of life that brim underneath.

the third stanza really brings it all together.

It's Greisy. Hm... Interesting. Yeah I thought it was funny but a bit too frank. And I've met Frank. He's not so funny.

Much Love,"Aibrean O'Kane"