I don't get it. Sorry. I'm not so great at these things. My teacher always says it's a problem, but I can't help it. I don't know what the poem means... Eh heh ^_^"

awesome piece. dark, but wonderfully written. good imagery, and nice repetition of images. i like your use of simile in the first stanza. love the ending. reminds me of this further seems forever song that ends with "i am my only devil." interesting. =D great work!

some searing images in this. really, really dark but so effective and powerful.

Very cool! I like how you use blood in every paragraph, but it doesn't seem overused. Not many people can do that.

Very interesting. Comparing yourself to a doll...hm I love it and yet I feel the angst at being such a vulnerable thing. I love the whole thought of it. Sort of chilling poem...I liked it alot. Great peice.

Liked it a lot.

Thought I was the only one who felt 'tears of blood'. Glad someone else in the world understands it.

thank you for reviewing my story, i'm glad you liked what you read...your poem is very well done. vampire poems are always so much fun to read! keep going, i'll be back!
-anime freakizoid X^_^X

...sugoi... You used one of my favorite words (doll) in my favorite context! *glomp* And I finally see what you mean by the weird html. I saw upside-down exclamation marks and switched my brain to Spanish only to find that the sentence was still in English. I'm assuming you were trying to put in ellipses. (those little "..." thingies)

Wow. I just love this!

Hi, just testing the reviews... Awesome poem, although I'm not sure what a doll has to do with blood...^.^; By the way, I know the short story you're using for the Lit Mag, but which poems are you using? Also, have you read Sakiko's story? Very cool. See you later!