This...chapter...was...so...shocking...still can't get over it!

First off, I just read my latest review, and I'm SO SORRY! I meant to say "DON'T change your writing style". I feel so bad! I don't want you to change anything!Now on to this chapter. Wow, just...wow. Mercutio's gay? Heaveny father... Well, he was much...likeable, in this chapter, I guess. Before he was becoming a tad bit irritable...but now, he's back to himself again. Always the brave and rebellious one. The "What if...?" one. I like that about him.Mercutio's sexuality certainly explains a lot. One, he wanted Roswell to come with him not only because they were close friends, but he actually wanted to BE with him!Two, his growing frustration with Roswell was only because he knew he was beginning to fall in love with him, but was in denial about it. Sure, Roswell's dependence probably played a factor in it, but not so much, I think.This is what I observed after reading this chapter. Maybe I'm right, maybe I'm wrong. I guess I'll see soon, eh? ;)~*Crazy Baiko*~

Yes! Finally an update from ya lol. With the buildup that this chapter provides, hopefully you don't leave us hanging for a long time. This chapter's interesting and opens up a whole lot of different storylines . . .you're right though, doesn't look so good for Roswell. It's interesting to see him here in his past, then go to the Gina story and see him so different, I love that lol. Good work, you're still the best storywriter on this whole site imo. (BTW, I was curious on the pic . . .almost exactly how I pictured Kasey . . . can't say fully cause I don't see the eyes, but it's close. I like your look, kinda dark and alluring ;) lol)

Good chapter. Why does Roswell puts up with Mercutio's **? Lately, Mercutio's been getting a lot more snippy and easily agitated like he doesn't want to be bothered with Roswell. If that was the case, then he shouldn't have bothered asking Roswell to come with him in the first place. I didn't find this chapter long at all. I am definitely liking Mercutio much less than I already did before. Gabriel's at the dock...that won't be good. That is one creepy character.
(PS: I just have one suggestion. You should add in more dialouge. By doing so, you could get a lot more completed in one chapter. I'm asking you to change writing styles or anything, because your's already great, I'm just saying you should have the characters talk a little more. :) )
~*Crazy Baiko*~

Good chapter. Very long, but good still! :D

Good chapter. This was mainly about what Roswell was feeling. I have a feeling that this will really heat a few chapters after the two boys arrive at Coulon. I honestly can't wait.
~*Crazy Baiko*~

An interesting chapter. Like you said in the A/N note, Rossy Boy is different lol. Good work, also glad you gave Roswell his own story b/c he's a good, unique character.

Oh, Roswell developing a little edge and attitude here. Good work, now onto the next chapter.

wowie... i finally had time to start this... it great.. great followup...
clarence sounds hot...

Roswell thought he was dying, well, I'm glad he's wrong. I felt exactly what Roswell was feeling when he found out Mercutio lied to him. I dunno, I thought Mercutio DID say it was illegal of them to live the city underaged, earlier... But, whatever. It was still good. I wonder what will happen next.
~*Crazy Baiko*~

I CAN FINALLY REVIEW!
Fictionpress wouldn't let me review for 6 or 7. Anyway, I'll just review for both of them here.
Gabriel is a creepy man...and I think he turned Roswell into a vampire, who'll turn Mercutio into a vampire, or even kill him by accident. That's just my guess.
I wonder what will happen in Coulon. This is getting interesting.
~*Crazy Baiko*~

Oh my God, Mercutio is gonna die. Gabriel is an obvious vampire, although Roswell and Mercutio might not know that. I was pretty scared actually, especially for Ross. What is Mercutio thinking? I think he's as good as dead.
~*Crazy Baiko*~

Did what I think happened, happen?? Lols. Good chapter! It's so slyish. I like it. Good work.

While I like Mercutio and all, he's a bad influence on Roswell. He seems to have a way of words, too, that makes it easy for him to persuade Roswell. For some reason, I see major villian potential in Mercutio.
I wonder what will happen next. (I guess I'll find out soon) lol. Ross has more guts than I thought. I'd be scared as hell to run away from my home. Mercutio is one brave boy.
~*Crazy Baiko*~

Wow...that was an interesting chapter. Very good writing. Had me hooked all the way. Keep up the good work Kassia.

I do think that Roswell and Mercutio will leave Roen together. I hope that Clarance or even Eliza would come with them. That would be good. :p
I found this chapter to be sorta emotional, especially for Roswell and Clarance.
Hopefully, I'll be caught up soon.
~*Crazy Baiko*~