Yet again great :D i hope you've got everything worked out

sad, so sad. i like this tho. i can relate a lot

Nice rhyming pattern. that is one thing that i have always had trouble with when I wrote poems: ryhmying.
I also like the emotions, and all the description about how you are feeling. it gets very emotional.
Thanks for the review, I had no idea that the format got messed up like that! That's why i should have used the preview feature, but stupedly i was too lazy to. my fault! all my fault! thanks for telling me.
I will look at more of your stuff in the future! Great poem!
-SilverOcean

Hehe...yeah. Matthew read it, and liked it a lot too. I'm glad you all enjoy it.
Hawke

Oh, sweet... I hope this wasn't a spat between you two. It's a good love poem. He'll read it, right?

Wow. Very powerful...I hope things turn out okay :)
I especially liked the old English in the line "feel my soul is split in twain." Reminded me of Shakespeare, lol :)
Oh...and I liked the pun on "whips and chains."