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| pointythings 2004-09-29 ch 1,  | abuseI like the last line, how it sort of contrasts with the happy feel of the first two. This is really nice. |
| Jo The Pirate 2004-09-28 ch 1, | abuseIt's slightly altered from the standard 5-7-5, yet close enough to be considered a haiku. Lovely words, images flowing, beautiful. Keep your pen moving! - Jo |