"With room for two.I’ve saved this second seat for you."Nice use of a line :)

Very beautiful and touching. You've drawn a wonderful image. Thanks.

Aw what a nice piece. ^__^ Its got that kiddy feel to it... that kid-like magical imagination. That's what makes it stick out, and that it was written using repetition so well. (But you kinda stopped with it near the end) ^_^ +fav

Beautiful imagery and so cute!

Very cute and peaceful. Nice job.

Lovely image, great ideas, well put together poem! The language, use of words and formatting is of a good standard.
Keep writing and good luck
Nine Iron