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| Shadow Gryphon 2004-09-28 ch 1, | abuseVery good! You left enough info to get me hooked, but kept enough back that it wsn't predictable. One mistake near the beginning, where you wrote scull instead of skull. No other mistakes, though. Update! Gryph |
| Romulan Empress 2004-09-28 ch 1, | abuseThis story sounds really fascinating. I am looking forward to reading more. |