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Children of the Gods
Shadow Gryphon
2004-09-28 . chapter 1
Very good! You left enough info to get me hooked, but kept enough back that it wsn't predictable. One mistake near the beginning, where you wrote scull instead of skull. No other mistakes, though.
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Gryph
Romulan Empress
2004-09-28 . chapter 1
This story sounds really fascinating. I am looking forward to reading more.
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