Wonderfull story. please continue

Nice idea. Great minds think alike, eh? [/fic plugging]

I appreciate the description of Rakumei and Koei's human form; however, it seems like there's too much of it in some places. It's like it messes up the flow of the story. Not to mention that it just seems awkward when the narrator is speaking from Rakumei's point of view. That said, this was nicely written. Do you plan on using these characters in the future?