Reviews for Subtle Pointillism

Twilight Starr 2007-11-02 ch 1,	abuseGood poem. ~Twilight Starr~
The Watched 2005-05-24 ch 1,	abuseHey, nice idea! To be honest I absoultely adore the phrase "subtle pointillism"; I'm a big fan of phrases that sound really deep until you relaise they're pretty straightforward really (try "molten ice" and "frozen rain" for a couple of examples) and I particularly like the rhyme at the end.
Kicking Poe 2005-05-16 ch 1,	abuseCreative idea and good execution. I like this a lot!
wordsworth in a garbage can 2005-05-15 ch 1,	abusehey, thanks for all the reviews! I enjoyed this. sometimes people want to make something big out of something small. I enjoyed it. keep writing!
alicesun 2004-11-29 ch 1,	abusehaha! I like very much! nicely done: varying levels of deepness. Very Cool.
Siberia1 2004-10-24 ch 1,	abuseI think this poem is a lot more profound that you make it. There's a sense of futility in every verse, as if there's nothing about life worth looking closely at. Don't put yourself down; it's excellent. Two thumbs up! b^_^d
ku 2004-09-28 ch 1, anon.	abuseyeah nice but it thought that if you strain your eyes you'd see the individual footprints.
Werecat99 2004-09-28 ch 1,	abuseI loved it. I senced a fell of desperation in it, of dissapointment. But that might just be me.