I love that you manage to say so much in so few words!
Your closing lines tie everything together nicely.
I really enjoyed readying this, nice job!

Good poem.

~Twilight Starr~

Hey, nice idea! To be honest I absoultely adore the phrase "subtle pointillism"; I'm a big fan of phrases that sound really deep until you relaise they're pretty straightforward really (try "molten ice" and "frozen rain" for a couple of examples) and I particularly like the rhyme at the end.

Creative idea and good execution. I like this a lot!

hey, thanks for all the reviews! I enjoyed this. sometimes people want to make something big out of something small. I enjoyed it. keep writing!

haha! I like very much! nicely done: varying levels of deepness. Very Cool.

I think this poem is a lot more profound that you make it. There's a sense of futility in every verse, as if there's nothing about life worth looking closely at. Don't put yourself down; it's excellent. Two thumbs up! b^_^d

yeah nice but it thought that if you strain your eyes you'd see the individual footprints.

I loved it. I senced a fell of desperation in it, of dissapointment. But that might just be me.