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Reviews For: The Autumn Moon Is Calling
Manuel Fajar 2004-10-18 . chapter 1
A delight to voice and imagine. Nicely done. I did find this part a bit awkward though—
"A wanderer does not choose the path when he departs
He follows the nightly lights to find where he belongs
But in truth, he's found it on the path he walks along."
Again, wonderful job. m
LuthienLuin 2004-09-28 . chapter 1
Another great one, what can I say? You've really evoked the feeling of the wilderness at night! Great use of wording too it really fits!
-LuthienLuin
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