Marvolouse. Love the symbolism. Truly potrays how the human deals with dissalution. And loss of love. Great imagery.
22 and a half squirrels out of 6 straight razor fiends.
The Magician

OMG! I loved this! its soo, we wont go there, u captured my feelings perfectly, and did something with them that I have never been able to do! great job!

THAT WAS FREAKIN AWESOME! Worded beautifully, flowing with perfection, no grammar mistakes that I can see... Wow... That was pretty awesome.