I would just like to say... the whole "no flames allowed".. wasting your time and also.. its good to learn to take constructive critism. :)
But I gotta say I really liked this.

That was really good...I love the part about "soft rhapsody of blue"...

Gorgouse.;_;

Noelle

aw so sweet! LOVE THE POEM! I am sure that Jenna will love it too!
M

who i love this poem! its really good touching, deep darn i need to think of something else to say these days... i can really relate to it and you did a really good job!