Ahh, pretty angst. I love pretty angst, and this poem/song was very beautiful. I loved the language and the imagery, especially the idea of the music box and the treasure. I also loved the idea of the speaker not knowing whether they're falling upwards or downwards because they feel the same. Anyway, it's a very beautifully written, angsty poem - well done ^^

Wow, I absolutely love this.
This is serious music material. The way you put the words, it reminds me of how Dave Matthews writes. Which is always fantastic in my book.
Going on my fav stories.

^_^ Aw... I'm not sure if I understand it completely, but I like what I do understand. The line about the music box was my favorite. ^_^ Keep writing, you are very talented.