Reviews for Pretty Shade of Grey

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PencilSketchS 2008-07-23 ch 4,	abusei want more! i love these two. heres hoping you update soon.
PencilSketchS 2008-07-23 ch 2,	abusei really like there two characters. and the story concept. and the fact that one of the main characters is south african cause i am too. but i won't be biased. Vaan is just as interesting as Saul. but i'm off now to go read the rest.
It Feels Like Rain 2008-06-23 ch 4,	abuseI really really like this story. Unlike a lot of the slas stories on here that I've read, it keeps me totally interested and wanting to hear what each character has to say. You put enough detail in that I can picture what is happening but not too much. I love that. I really love the characters too because they seem very real and are the kinds of characters you never get tired of reading what they have to say. I love also, how opinionated and blunt Vaan is. You truly write him very well, and I can't wait to read more. Hope you did well on your finals as well and I am looking forward to reading more of this story when you update it again.
smiles 2008-06-15 ch 4, anon.	abuseAh, Kokomo. I had to put it on while reading this chapter lolz. “All right, you’re like the world’s biggest oxymoron.” “Or some kind of moron, anyway.” Funny. But I didn’t want to leave. I was having this illogical feeling that if I left the laundry room, I wouldn’t run into Vaan again for another three weeks. Absolutely adorable. And I loved the long long long chapter again. Isn't that funny that you ended up meeting him. Something similar happened with a couple of friends of mine at school. One day the saw this goth-punky kind of guy walking down the road outside our school, and ended up stalking him for like, a year or something. Finally they actually met him through friends of friends of friends...kinda awkward I guess. I mean, they'd been watching him for ages, they even had code names for him and all sorts of stuff. Well, I guess it looks like you haven't updated this in a while, but hey, I can always hope right? ^-^ Until next time.
smiles 2008-06-15 ch 3, anon.	abuseyup, enjoyed uber-super-long chapter muchly ^-^ “Hey, wait up,” Saul said, grabbing the hubs of his wheels and pushing himself after me. I frowned slightly, thinking I’d misheard. Wait?Like he actually wanted to continue this conversation? So I stopped, waiting for the catch or something. Saul got to the door, then glanced up at me, a smile tugging at his mouth. “Uh…you can stop waiting now,” he said. I blinked. Cutest thing ever...right there...just above this line... I love Vaan. I love Saul too. They both give me fuzzies inside. And it's really sweet the way they're both so lonely but really don't show it. Just wow. They're both such individual characters.
smiles 2008-06-15 ch 2, anon.	abuseOmg, South African accents are teh sex, absolutely...there are few accents sexier. I love Saul, especially how he's so hurt and troubled by the whole wheelchair situation but puts this really cute brave front to cover how insecure he is about the whole situation. And the little meeting thing...so cute. I was all smiles throughout this one, but as opposed to omfg!hilarious smiles, these were more sweetly sad smiles, because they're both so amazing and you're wonderful!
smiles 2008-06-15 ch 1, anon.	abuseLines that made me laugh the hardest: Everything about me is there, on the surface, beating you with a big ** stick. Imagining waking up next to that person in the morning. No eyebrows. Good God. “yo, Maurice, where’s the mixed salad greens at?” This is brilliant! If fictionpress supported emphasis markers that brilliant would be underlined and in bold italics. Seriously. Just short, sweet (actually, I think Vaan would probably have something to say about being described as sweet) and totally hilarious. Can't wait to see who's next! Oh, man...the funnies... (something I was desperately in need of)
jaybriel 2008-02-07 ch 3,	abusemeh, just because I felt like reiterating how much I like this story, bizarro seeing as there really isn't much of it ^-^ but you said there's a sequel?!?! A sequel?!?!?! Could you post that do you think? Coz really that would be the next best thing to updating this, though it would be a little trippy i guess...meh whatever, I love the stuff you write.
jaybriel 2007-07-18 ch 4,	abusePlease update...pretty please? sighs I swear this is the like the fiftieth time I've read this and there's not even any story yet!! Wish I could write that well...are you feeling guilty? Just kidding, I don't want to pressure you, but hey, like two years or whatever is a long time and it's a serious waste to just let this go. Anyway bye and hope to see you next chapter!
Squirrel Activist 2007-05-11 ch 4,	abuseI REALLY think you should update this. ;)
bansira 2007-02-14 ch 4,	abuseAww... this story is really sweet! The characters are amazing and so adorable. Both of them. I can't even tell which one i like better - probably Vaan, though. He has that punky feeling to him
The Aquatic Chewbacca 2007-01-27 ch 4,	abusegreat story. seriously, this is awesome. it's moving kind of slow, but i like that. you can get more into the characters that way. anyways, please update!! i know you haven't in a while, but im going to keep my fingers crossed! ~kon
Lady E 2007-01-22 ch 4,	abuseIs there any way I could badger you into updating possibly just one more chapter? You definitely created two very distinct individuals, both of whom I'm shamelessly falling for. This is really one of the few slash fics in which I'd say you've done such a good job building up the friendship, I actually wouldn't mind at all if a more romantic relationship never grew from it. They actually work very well together as friends. And there were some wonderful plot moments in here too. I would love to see more.
Osunale 2006-11-13 ch 4,	abuseOh, oh! You dazzled me! This one is even better than Christian Faith. Saul and Vaan just blow me away...brilliant. And thank you so, so much for "And no one makes a big deal about Glorfindel at all. ...first they replace him with Legolas, then Arwen. Arwen didn’t even speak until like the third ** book! What’s she doing casting spells that Gandalf and Elrond are supposed to be casting from Rivendell?” Maybe this helps shoot Vaan right up to the top in my book. Excellent work.
Satan's Angelic Mistress 2006-10-09 ch 4,	abuseif chapter 7 is in works, 80% done, then where the hell are chapters 5 and 6? I want MORE!

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