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PinkyWink 2009-11-07 . chapter 6
This story is just wonderful for the fact that hardly anyone writes about people in wheelchairs and the things they have to do that most people take for granted. You don't have pity for Saul because he doesn't want it and can take care of himself. He really needed to be exposed to someone like Vaan to get in touch with his emotions about the accident; which he seems to be in denial. OMG I'm in love with Vaan ! He has issues also, but he is so much fun. I hope you update soon. I love it. Thank You !
DBZ-FAN-JESS 2009-11-01 . chapter 6
Wow this story is freaking amazing. A few grammar errors and missing words but other than that I love these two characters!
Zom 2009-10-16 . chapter 6
Marry me. Srsly.

I'm pretty much in love with everything you write, and I got around to reading this story today. So glad I did! Vaan and Saul are both fantastic characters and their interaction is so silly and sweet. They make me smile~

Eagerly awaiting more of whatever you choose to update next! You are fabulous~
PyroTech 2009-10-05 . chapter 6
oh. my. god. Write more please! me totally love! ^^
invisible black sheep 2009-09-30 . chapter 6
Please update! I was really hooked on this story.
dark_amphibian 2009-09-27 . chapter 6
Aw, I just read this from start to...here, tonight. Want to hug both lead characters and bring them home. Which doesn't mean I'm not anxiously awaiting the next installment of Nocturne, btw ;-)

You've done a really good job imho, of balancing the characters having issues and being OTT. In all your stories (just found you this weekend - woot!), you show a particular talent for little slice-of-life moments that bring the characters and the whole story to life.
Cut and Paste 2009-08-29 . chapter 6
This is really beautiful. :)
livelifelovehgdm 2009-08-19 . chapter 1
oh, please don't put this story on hiatus. I love it. It's so wonderful. I am defiantly a huge fan, please keep it up.
marylinn 2009-08-18 . chapter 6
Sorry for double-reviewing... but that picture of Karajan is amazing and I've half a mind to blow it up, too.
marylinn 2009-08-18 . chapter 6
So what's the name of that piece conducted by Karajan? I'm swept away by their enthusiasm.
[Even without the editting, I really love this story; just wanted to let you know.]
ForeverFayte 2009-08-09 . chapter 6
So I really really Love this And I do hope you continue. I adore Vaan, wish I kew someone like him in real life!
You're writing such an amazing story, your characters all have such great personality, I love all the jokes and conversations. Vaan's and Sauls realationship and how its evolving, and everthing about this story in general, It all just just seems so real.

And not to mention that you can write emotions brilliantly, from Im so happy I can explode, to the scene where Saul told Vaan about the accident, It seriously brought tears to my eyes.

So yeah I love it and I hope you continiue!
Jenlyn 2009-08-01 . chapter 6
So I really can't even begin to express how much I fell in love with this story while reading it. I'm hoping that it's something that you'll continue to work on, because I quite adore it. Vaan and Saul are all kinds of adorable. I'd like to come up with something a little more coherent, but I don't know how well I would manage that. :]
PencilSketchS 2009-08-01 . chapter 6
I would just like to restate just how in love I am with this story! It's amazing, and so much fun to read. I love your characterisation. Vaan and Saul are interesting and funny and real!

En jy het Saul laat afrikaans praat. Dit was meer as net baie lekker om te lees. Afrikaans is my tweede taal, en dit amper ongelooflik om dit hier te vind. Dit was kort, maar het my some opgewonde gemaak.

If my afrikaans is bad, just understand it's not my first language, and though I can understand it fine I don't speak it well.

I want to read the next chapter. The tension between these two are killing me.

You write with a lot of humor and your characters are intelligent and stimulating. Just, good job. I can't wait for more.

Are you from S.A. by any chance?

gah, okay, end
Tired of waiting for you 2009-07-29 . chapter 6
im loving it loving it loving it, im loving it like this. i relaly dont see what you have to change about the past few chapters. they are all really good, and so very interesting. I can't wait for the next update. Keep up the good work.
ddz008 2009-07-28 . chapter 6
Great chapter!! I really love Vaan and Saul. This chapter was specially good :) I like how we are getting to know them with each chapter and they have a lot of depth as characters. And also that we don't know a lot of things about them... like what happened with Saul's ex-girlfriend (I imagine that she rejected him or something after the accident) or how is Vaan's life with his parents ( they really don't like him if they haven't gone to see him do anything since 7th grade). I really like their relationship, it's really natural and unique. They have a lot of chemistry. The scene in which Saul tells Vaan about the accident was really moving and it showed much about their friendship... also when Vaan carries Saul and etc... There are too many scenes in here that show us how unique their relation is. It was really nice that Vaan holded his hand at the end and that they are sharing with each other the things they like (the play and the concert). Also... Vaan is so a theatre major. I liked that Vaan is so open about everything and how Saul is so accepting of all his quirks. I imagine that Vaan will really first that he loves him and be totally natural about it... or maybe not, he is kind of unpredictable. Thanks for updating! :) I really hope you continue with this and update soon! P.S. I looked Herbert Von Karajano in google and that was the picture I thought Vaan gave Saul. And sorry for this extremely weird and incoherent review XD
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