LOVE IT!

Isn't time always against us? I loved this. i really did. Beautiful. Thanks for writing it, and for reviewing my work as well!

Very flowing and realistic. It's nice.

Oh, I like it. Free verse has always been a favorite of mine ^_^ I do enjoy how it flows without a srict way of doing such. Keep up the good work!

I like this very much. Phrases like, "delicate details of a dream," really make the poem for me, and I also like the ending. Some poems have weak or sucky endings, but this one is quite appropriate.