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| the shadow in the mirror 2006-05-21 ch 1, anon. | abusethanks for reviewing "shocked". this is a cool poem, I personly hate rumours, they mess life up. |
| Complications 2005-10-01 ch 1,  | abuseIt's so perfect, the rhym and It send's a clear msg, I really like it -not just saying that- Your style really appeals to me. |
| black*tears*of*innocence 2005-09-09 ch 1, | abusethis is so beautiful!! it has great flow and rhyming! i know EXACTLY how this feels! 100 percent!! omg, it is so flippin annoying and horrible. its depressing. especially if the rumors aren't even true! i just wanna crawl into a dark hole and never leave. and, it sux when a person or friend you thought you could trust does it behind your back thinking you won't find out and then denies it to your face. yeah, it sux!! well, newayz, good job and KW! ~davida |
| Angelique 2005-01-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseI thought that poem was really good, it totally describes how I feel sometimes. Anyways its a really good poem. |
| Eternal Light101 2004-10-19 ch 1, | abuseWhat a majestic poem. Completely awed by it right now. Simply magnificent. Flames Out Eternal Light P.S Sorry I havent reviwed in so long. Could you please check out my newest poem: Urequieted Volition? |
| Kiran S 2004-10-08 ch 1, | abusehey! this was a really neat poem. u defiantely got talent.and yes i have wished for a place like that. but it seems like there'll never be one. anyways thanx for the great review! ur sikh? and canadaian? aweseome!! where do u live? anywyas great poem once again! kiran |
| Arutha 2004-10-08 ch 1, | abuseWow :D That one rocked. Haven't seen the likes of me in a while, eh? Haha, your friend eviljackinthebox mentioned you in a review and it reminded me to check up on you. This one is awesome. I'm not sure if I'm relating correctly, but this poem makes me think of all the times I wish everyone would just shut up so I could think. Haha, anyhow, really well written. |
| simpleplan13 2004-09-30 ch 1, | abuseI definately know that feeling... ncie rhyming too! |
| hocsll 2004-09-30 ch 1, | abuseit's beautiful...fully embodies what i'm feeling now |
| eviljackinthebox 2004-09-29 ch 1, | abuseThat was yet another Emmytastic poem if I do say so myself. I love the imagery you use in your verses, and how your rhyming scheme works just right. the rhythm may be a bit off in some parts, but that's easy to fix. you've really gotten your feelings across in this poem though, and it's got a really strong sense of where it wants to be. You're an amazing poet emmy, don't let anyone tell you otherwise. and keep it up, I just love seeing the author alert in my e-mail tray, because I know that it's one just HAVE to read. You are one of the only people that are that way, and I admire you for that. Your friend forever, Larissa |