I never actually thought about it like this. Interesting and true poem. It made me think of something. It made me think of my childhood and something that happened. I loved it. Thnx for making me look at something in a whole new way. Cool!

I like it in all honesty. I think you could've expanded the idea further and added a few words here and there to even it out. Another thing was that you relly didn't go too into the whole 'spider' idea. I did enjoy it though, and I think the title is a little bland for a poem so intruiging.