I am sorry but the rhyme is a little predictable at times. The best way is to space it out, not rhyme every pair. Put them in at moments that follow the flow and beat of the poem. There is some good lines, the rhymes are well done in many instances but I would suggest my ideas. I am sure many people will like and enjoy this work. The faries line I particually liked and the whole ending is intelligent and well rounded.
Keep writing and good luck
Nine Iron