With everything going on in the world? who has time to wait for something! Rock on! Isn't it true how adults never take kids seriously and how they always put themselves before the kids because of their senority? Keep up the good work. Nice social satire peice.

Bonjour, my friend. Did you really have to use your shoe?
No, no, don't tell me, I'm just playing with you! I really enjoyed this one. The wording isn't insanly annoying, as I find a good deal of humor poems to be, so that' definetly a good thing. The rhythm is a little funky, but it sounds fine all the same.
If all else fails, there's always my shoe... I think I used that theory on Thursday...
Nice Job!^_^
Alyssa

Nice poem that experiments with different lengths of meter. However, some places were a bit unnatural sounding. Nonetheless, nice poem.