 Blaze the Unmaker 2004-11-02 . chapter 1Hello! Thank you for the review -^__^-
I really like the way you repeat the point of the poem on the top of each stanza. It gets the point across, I guess, and sounds good... but then again, like everything you write is good, so... |
 Shelia Gavin 2004-10-07 . chapter 1Hey Katt!
I like this one. It has a very strong message behind it and the rhyming is very simplistic and perfectly accurate in a descriptive sense. Damn you all for being taler and better than me! (I have split personalities today... the calm, intellectual one... and the angry at the world and everyone it in one... *sigh*)
Okey, just leaving a short-er review1 Luv the poem though!
Alyssa |