absolutly love the last two stanzas. they are so moving. "I can't hear you. Cry, Cry! Scream, Scream! I can't hear you. Gone. That's what you are. That's what I want. Gone." Amazing. Much love,me

Great poem, would be nice as a song. The repetitions really enhance the intensity, you get across the emotions really well. I especially like the first stanza, the way it develops into a climax with the "I just don't want to be". I think many can relate to that.

Don't u worry! help is on its way soon!
don't give up!
great poem!