HOLY SNAP!!
O_o!
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oh no...you actually wrote this in 2004...i guess i'll never see the end. how sad.

Just one thing:
GET THIS STORY TO A PUBLISHER!
It's amazing, and soo sweet. I love it ^_^

hey i love your story its cute and kinda sad and yet strangely happy at the same time wow excuse my weirdness O.o anyway.. update soon ill be watching for it and keep up the good work
~magnolia

im hooked on this story u sucked me into it and i want more of it now !lol j/k but i do want more story i luv it

I love this story! It's killing me to know what happens; and I just finished the story less than a minute ago! Please finish the story quickly; but, as you should aslways do, make it to your liking.

~thestinger

I am SO confused! How the hell did that happen? How did Fue come back?! Does that mean Kita's back too?! God, you know how to kill someone on an ending... So much so that I'm going to do something that I've never done and, truth be told, despise. I'm actually going to ask for a sequal. That in itself should show you how great your story is and how much you managed to frustrate me. So, to be the annoying little fan, please, please, PLEASE (with sugar and chocolate and cherries and cake and icecream and... a new car!) write a sequal before I go into a random chocolate spree, go broke from it, and gain a hundred pounds from the stress and confusion and... stuff. So, um... Please?!

I read this chapter, but I was being lazy and didn't review. Forgive me? I loved this story. And I liked the end.

Hey, hey! It's finally letting me review! Yay! Anyways, yes, I have walked out of here sane... er... I think! I did start hearing strange paper crinkling noises that apparently no one else hears, but other then that, compleletly sane! ^.^ Anyways, I adore this storie! I'm forcing my friend Rachie to read it!

lol..this chapter totaly feels like you just got tired of it and so finished it in the quickest but neates way..which by your authorsnote, you did.. coughlazycough...just playing. maybe..it was still good..i liked the whole thing at the end about them always being together no mater what time or place. it was sweet...its sad that Sarah died..:-(..but i'm glad the wierd shadow creature thing is gone..yippie...anyway..wonderful job with the whole story. I'll check out your other story sooner or latter.

Wow! I have been reading this all day and I just love it. You're doing a fantastic job so far darling, don't stop now.

This is amazing! I love it! It's definitely going on my favorites list. I would like to see a little more of Fue though...please?

Amazing work...

Wormy

pretty good so far. storyline is great

I'm a little confused, but very, very intrigued. I loved this chapter, because Kito is becoming a much stronger person, and Fue is just adorable. I'm also starting to sense some evil vibes, and I'm developing some suspicions ... but I'll keep my mouth shut. I wouldn't want to look like an idiot if I'm completely wrong, heh. I wish Niki, Sara and Hirami could be as happy as Kito and Fue. I can't wait 'til next chapter! :3

Another cliffhanger! This was a great chapter and I love how Kito is slowly becoming more confidant. I hope he can save his friends!