amazing - i love it! i found it when i was showing my story one of my friends (i had temporarily forgotten my log-in) and it is honestly one of my absolute favorite poems of all time - wow! i have wanted to say that to so many people, but it would have been lying - not now! this is the total, honest-to-baja truth! i'm in awe, shock, and almost speechless!

I just changed my name, if you're wondering so I'm the same reviewer.

Yes, unusual poem but I did like the imagery. You spin a tale with your poems, your words appear like a flipbook, those children's books that you flip the pages really fast so the pictures move. Again, thanks for the good read. I deeply enjoy your poetry.

Wow, odd indeed, but very nice. It gived me very vivid images in my mind, especially the lines "Look away from a half-dead sun/Tramp on towards the south."

*adds poem to favourites*