hey. You know you don't accept anonymous reviews. You should change that because not every reeader is a writer.
Great poem. Not what i expected from the summary but it's great all the same. btw thanks for reviewing Pointless Joy. I know it' snot 5-7-5 beecause i was still learning when i wrote it. Now i am educated. In fact there are two versions of it now the second one (second chapter) has the correct haiku format if you'd care to read. Excuse any spelling mistakes in this review it always happynes when i type too fast.
Great poem though. Lots of really fantastic images.