lol, this is funny, but I do detect a serious message underneith. But honestly I have n idea who Adonis is...but either way the idea is clear.

-write on!

Hahaha, this one is real funny! )

ok, not bad, but WHIP-ISH, (sorry dude, had to, irresistable) Stay Sic
The King of the Assclowns

Hehe...Nice song, it's the title what I like the written.

lol.. taht was humorous... but I liked it.. itneresting story... and nice ending/message

OMG! I love this! This is so hilarious! Yet, meaningful. A friend of mine is in a relationship like that. lol.
Love it, and thanks for the review!
Magz.
PS: Sorry you've been there too. Seems like a lot of readers of that poem do.

Wow, this made me smile. This is well-written and the tone of it just makes soemone... smile. :)

glad you like it. and i know the title's long, but.. i just love ridiculously long titles!
i gotta say two of my favorite songs are: "Tell That Mick, He Just Made My List of Things to do Today", And "If We Had to Choose Between White or Wheat Bread, We Would Seriously Have to Sit Down to Think About it" (and the song has nothing to do with that at all) i love that! lol

heheehehehehe! i liked it. one thing, titles a tad long...