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| Tangerine Tickle 2005-08-20 ch 2,  | abuseHahaha!! You're funny. Not just in the story, but in your Author Notes, too! :p Zakori is just kawaii. . . So are you gonna update? For me?? //Please//?? ^__^ ~Tangerine Tickle~ |
| Tangerine Tickle 2005-08-20 ch 1, | abuseOoh, very interesting. . . I really liked the beginning, with Zakori's POV. Such truthful words. But what was that one part about, where it suddenly says, ". . . .sc. ."? Was Zakori saying something, but got cut off? Or does it stand for something, like. . .Scene Change? :p Just a guess. Okay, enough rambling, I must know what happens next!! So on to chapter two~! :D ~Tangerine Tickle~ |
| Kini Takohashi 2005-08-05 ch 1, | abuseAHAHAhAHHAHAH! I luv it! Luv it luv it luv it! need more! as you may have guessed, I am forever your BIGGEST FAN EVER! AHAHAH! POST MORE! PLEASE?! -your loyal servant Kini Takohashi- |
| natalia 2005-07-05 ch 2, anon. | abuseI like this one...i like all of them. hehe |
| fantasy-star 2005-02-27 ch 1, | abuseI can't stop reading your work, it's pretty good. And I admire those writers who have their own style of writing... like you. |
| Naomi Schemer 2005-01-04 ch 2, | abuseChoclate piece of delidioucsness? Can I have one, if I review? LOL, awsome story, Zak sounds so freaking cute. Awsome story, please please please update soon. **puppy eyes** |
| TopatoPotato 2004-10-16 ch 2, | abuseWow, this story makes me so... happy! The characters are really cute, it's alot of fun. I am not sure I understand any of the dollar part but that is alright. I look forward to reading your next chapter! |
| TopatoPotato 2004-10-02 ch 1, | abuseI love your writing style, it's very sophisticated and effective. The characters are pretty neat, and I love the concept. Very good! Keep writing! |