I particularly like this story. I think it just appeals to my attraction for all things "oogley boogley". I particularly liked the description of the footprint split in half by the fence. That's a great image.

Great job on the story. makes you bring out your childish fantasies.

Angry Rietveld says, "Damn kids get out of my crime scene!" But, anyhow, I liked this one, especially the children's names. I think you'll get a good grade on this one in class. I need to take creative writing. It seems like fun. v.v; "Crazy person" eh? Well, its true.