dude you rock! 82 poems/short stories? i wanna read them all! Just because i like the way you explain yourself and your...uh, ..views? Yeah.. but this poem was cool.. i dont think your artistic complexion is withering.. then agian, what would i know?

I'm reading your stuff now. YeaH!
I understand, I guess, because it's the same thing as some people who sing, and possibly a really long thing that is written, and yes. I like "complexion." This one seems rather specific. Not that thats bad at all though.

Bonjour, je suis dans la classe de francais, alors je pense en francais a ce moment-la.
Um, I like the poem, and understand completely. I like the formatting, and the repetition and list of adverbs and everything, really. All of it, except that the word withering is gross to me. Makes me think of ugly old women. I just feel like you could have picked a different word that would have meant it more, without such a wrinkly-gross connotation. But if that's the word that sticks in your head for this concept, for this word, it's fine; I'm not as against it as it sounds in this review.
This is like the best review I've written you in a very long time. I'm sorry that I cannot be glowing and loving this poem, but I can't.
When are you posting la belle-I mean, the beautiful-that I helped you revise?
Le francais est SUCH une belle langue.