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| TheBrokenWanderer 2005-07-23 ch 1,  | abusei love the idea, and the pain you convey...but i think the rhyming maybe a bit forced, which gets a lot of people into trouble...hell, it's gotten me into trouble...and there was one point where you said place in two consecutive lines...that threw me off a little...but it was still a great poem, and i'll stop rambling now... ~TheBrokenWanderer~ |
| Tired-of-Tears 2005-06-02 ch 1, | abuseI loved this poem...I actually cried..its so sad...I wish i could help more. |
| Meg St. James 2004-10-01 ch 1, | abuseomg... i kno just wat ur going thru. My best friend is my crush... i actually might be in love w/ him... w/e. I know what you're going through. he just got a girlfriend and he calls me up to talk about her. I'm happy for him, just like you said, but i'm also said that it's not me he's head over heels for. so yea, i kno what ur going through. It'll get better with time... at least that's what they tell me. I at least hope its true. ~Meg |
| MyVeryOwnDreamland 2004-10-01 ch 1, | abusedude thats really sad. but good really really really good |
| A-Train 2004-09-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseAw. I'm so sorry. I feel your pain. |
| Teacup Majoram 2004-09-30 ch 1, | abuseThat's exactly how I feel right now. Sucks doesn't it? Good poem describing your pain. |
| Rina-Lyn Bae 2004-09-30 ch 1, | abuseThis is awesome! I love how you've written this. First off, the rhyme amazes me, probably because I can't do it myself and you've managed to keep the poem flowing AND rhyming. Secondly, I love the emotion you've put into this. I can tell how you feel, and there's enough emotion that I feel for you too. Very very talented writing! Keep it up! ~~RLB |