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| Poetrybay 2005-01-30 ch 1,  | abusenicely put it's short and simple and it catches the readers eye |
| katmonkey 2005-01-24 ch 1, | abuseVery nice imagery. I like this a lot. |
| Galadh Niniel 2005-01-07 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful, I like the way you mix different sense impressions in the perception, that makes the impression very intense. |
| wheresthespacekey 2004-11-25 ch 1, | abuseits beautiful =) |
| Genius-Ben 2004-11-14 ch 1, | abuseThumbs up from The Benster! |
| Toph Gonzalez 2004-10-21 ch 1, | abuseReally? This is your first? Very impressive. Thanks for your reviews! |
| Endless Nightmares 2004-10-09 ch 1, | abuseHello- I liked this one. Nicely detailed. Full of life. |
| Caledonia 2004-10-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseHAHAHAHA! ok, that review crack me up. Not the haiku. u showed me this is school so..i don't know what to say honestly. i like that untainted pink snow part. and...good job. haha don't kill me for giving stupid reviews. |
| Manuel Fajar 2004-10-02 ch 1, | abuse¡Delightful! It's induction is haunting, leading us to tinge all snow with pink, knowing that it'll turn to blood, . . . It generates feelings and thoughts. If you only wrote this you should feel fulfilled. ~m~ p.s. The ambiguitiy with rougue--rogue or rouge is absolutely splendid!! |
| Glennesque 2004-10-01 ch 1, | abusecool haiku, like the image of a single 'rogue' falling, challenging the season. |
| Angel of the North 2004-10-01 ch 1, | abuseyeah, I like this - did you mean rogue or rouge - either works, but the rogue is somewhat less cliched |