 Poetrybay 2005-01-30 . chapter 1nicely put it's short and simple and it catches the readers eye |
 katmonkey 2005-01-24 . chapter 1Very nice imagery. I like this a lot. |
 Galadh Niniel 2005-01-07 . chapter 1Beautiful, I like the way you mix different sense impressions in the perception, that makes the impression very intense. |
 wheresthespacekey 2004-11-25 . chapter 1its beautiful =) |
 Genius-Ben 2004-11-14 . chapter 1Thumbs up from The Benster! |
 Toph Gonzalez 2004-10-21 . chapter 1Really? This is your first? Very impressive. Thanks for your reviews! |
 Endless Nightmares 2004-10-09 . chapter 1Hello- I liked this one. Nicely detailed. Full of life. |
 Caledonia 2004-10-03 . chapter 1 HAHAHAHA! ok, that review crack me up. Not the haiku. u showed me this is school so..i don't know what to say honestly. i like that untainted pink snow part. and...good job. haha don't kill me for giving stupid reviews. |
 Manuel Fajar 2004-10-02 . chapter 1¡Delightful! It's induction is haunting, leading us to tinge all snow with pink, knowing that it'll turn to blood, . . . It generates feelings and thoughts. If you only wrote this you should feel fulfilled. ~m~
p.s. The ambiguitiy with rougue--rogue or rouge is absolutely splendid!! |
 Glennesque 2004-10-01 . chapter 1cool haiku, like the image of a single 'rogue' falling, challenging the season. |
 Angel of the North 2004-10-01 . chapter 1yeah, I like this - did you mean rogue or rouge - either works, but the rogue is somewhat less cliched |