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| Tiernan Hunter 2007-08-30 ch 1,  | abusefun, i really like this. that's a cool take on death. |
| Tsukiyo no Yume 2005-02-12 ch 1, | abuseCreepy, but I like it. You see death as an inexorable, haunting presence - I think that's interesting. (I always thought death was just a body losing all its spirit energy, chi, whatever you want to call it; not negative, just neutral.) My favorite part is "occasionally I wonder,/Iwonder what you think when I step out". This shows your, shall we say, familiarity with that shinigami on the wall. Interesting... Keep writing, always! Power to the authors! ~Tsukiyo |