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| hells666angel 2006-02-21 ch 8,  | abuseok officially hooked on this story as well!! i just luv Dez - you write such good charaters! and i dont see what she has agaisnt the devil...he sounds reli nice!! and the angels?? when will we see them again?? the devils so sweet though saving her liek that!! AWW! ok please update this one too!! |
| Adueria-Sothis 2005-07-14 ch 7, | abuseWOW! lol i loved the dark humor and Cedric sounds so cute. keep up your excellent writting. |
| DiegoManuelR 2005-03-22 ch 7, | abuseI say that this is a pretty good story. I mean it got me interesed in a whole new perspective of what the Devil is. But not enough to ge me into satanism. LOL. But so far pretty good and I hope you write more about this. |
| Wondering Wolf 2005-02-21 ch 7, | abuseI'm really getting into this story. I hope you add some more to it soon. |
| Peachez 24 2004-12-23 ch 6, anon. | abuseYES! I was wondering when you'd introduce the brothers. Though I didn't think this would be the story, but it fits. Great chapters, and funny as hell. Keep writing and update soon!! Peachez ^_~ |
| Pothe 2004-12-21 ch 6, | abuseeverything is just so casual about this encounter ( mostly), seems a bit awkward that she still wants to get on with this date more than find out why the angel's are there. anyways can't wait for the next chappie, sounds very promising.-lethal nightshade |
| Kizera 2004-12-07 ch 5, | abuseWrite more ok |
| Wondering Wolf 2004-11-28 ch 5, | abuseI WANT MORE! ok sorry for sounding pushy but your a damn good writer! |
| Pothe 2004-11-28 ch 5, | abuseooh wings! wings are good! wings are exciting! most of the time wings promise sexy things attached to them! |
| Peachez 24 2004-11-27 ch 4, anon. | abuseWell well well... ain't she just getting screwed over nine ways to Sunday? Though why Cedric's setting her up if he cares for her so is strange. Maybe it's his way of staying close to her if she does drift apart? *shrugs*Either way keep writing and update soon!! Peachez ^_~ |
| Rizzy 2004-11-27 ch 4, | abuseI love this story so much! The humor is great! Different from the usual I've been reading around here. :) Keep it up! Can't wait for the next update. ~MS |
| green n yellow fish 2004-11-27 ch 4, | abusewow. keep going! i am really enjoying this story.. :P |
| Pothe 2004-11-26 ch 4, | abuseoh love the ending: maybe i was just another sacrifice. should be in a song or something. the first part was a bit confusing as, just like her thoughts I was wondering if he liked her so much why on earth was he making dates with her. the devil works his charm to get a guy whos in love to give him his girl...gotta love evil ^^ |
| Hikitsu kitten 2004-11-22 ch 3, anon. | abuseNice please write more ok.. |
| Pothe 2004-11-08 ch 2, | abusehahaha, hey I like sushi, sushi is good! sushi is friend! I love how you've portraid the devil, cedric sounds like such a cute puppy ^^ , cant wait for another chapter my lil moonlitdemon! |