Well, it's really something very intriguing to write about...lightning. Anyways, I love this, it appeals to me with a sense of desperation and vulnerability. Good job.

I love this. It is short and and sweet and the format coveys the function of the peice perfectly. In a way if you formatte this you can probably make it look like a lightning bolt. Just a suggestion. Anyway good job, and keep it up.

Fascinating, you show several complex emotions in this, I applaud you, keep up the goodwork.
Much love,
Juliet.