I love the first stanza, really good images. This one is really good, reminds me of some people. You're a talented writer.

Wow . . . one of the best things you've ever written. I really really liked this one

Untouchable... such a fitting title for a poem like this. Very good job on it, too. Really strikes a chord.

~Lidless Eye

wow.. I like this one best.. its so beautifully written and so sad.. especially that end... you describe her magnificently.. great great poem

Not bad, it flows nicely and its got a nice feeling...please write more.

This is beautiful! True poetry. I love it!

I understand this completely... there was a girl in my life who was untouchable... I missed my one and only chance... u_u
Very good descriptions, especially if I can epathize with this subject.
Doumo Arigatou Gozaimasu
~Nico

I like it.. awesome descriptions

nice poem...I don't know why but it would also make a nice story, but you don't have to write one, time is very hard to find these days