hey!! i just read the whole story. its really really really good! u write very well! it was short but good! :)

aw. now there together. does that mean in the sequel ur gna break them up?? coz im warning u now..LOTS of ** of yelling. and yeh i have to do SRP too...stupid science. post up that story u rote on ur blog. it was cool. reeli depressing. but cool. and itd be even better if wen she went bak inside after being depressed she listen to good charlotte. hmm...im gna listen to them now...cya at skool. good ending. about time! i like alex. sweet guy.

*gasp*!u suk! and get ur freakin comp fixed! and now i forgot who jake was! and have to go bak and reread...cliff! y did u do that!?!?! she heard...but aw!! so sweet! PLZ GET THEM TOGETHER! and then u can write a sequel where they break up or watever...but just get them toghether!

u suk. hello! he lyks her! well i havent reeli read the whole thing...trying to finish sp crossword will read later...and fyn then! i wont review...next one and yeh u can rite pya and u dont reeli need to leave a msg...and yes i noe im wierd...JESSE MAC RULES!

holidays! yay! i lyk alex *shrug* not completely sure y..but i like him..get together!

hey dude...ette! im bak took me a while..guess wat im going to say?! GET TOGETHER ALREDI! but ofcourse ur gna b a mean bum and make him get with CC and she get jealous and then the other way round or watever...etc etc..i have to make a cake =D cya tomorrow u noe it totally suks coz i wont get any of the cake bak...:'(

loved it! it really is good! and even though no ones reviewing im sure they're just to lazy...so please update soon!

I really like this : )

hiye! this sTory is niCe.. morE peRsonal.. Very easY 2 Read n unDerstand =) kinDa addictive too.. hahaz.. quik update!! :p

heya!! i like it...got bit confused initially..u picked two names that culd have been guy or gurl :p but i relised ash was a gurl...too much shrieking for a guy...i like it...ttyl