It amazes me time after time how much emotion can be fit into 3 sentences. Nice Work.

Very short! A little to short for me. But it was good for what it was. I'll give it a 7.2 out of 10.

I'm not one to read haiku's, because in my opinion it seems all too easy, but this is so basic (not in a bad way) that it's completely understandable. ~ JD

So sweet, so vivid. Lovely.

nice. I like it

so very sweet...good job, i enjoy reading ur haikus...:)

Wow, beautiful, you captured this feeling very nicely.

Wow, thats beautiful. I love it.

Fictionpress hasn't been letting me review your haiku, so here it FINALLY is. This has a lot of nice detail and visual, if you get what I'm saying. Your way with haiku is fascinating; it's almost like it comes to you naturally. Awesome job here.

I'm not a haiku person...seems to easy of a talent...but I love just with in three lines you had so much emotion...the words...good job...now to read more..

Sweet and so powerful! I liked the surging of emotions part! It portrayed the passion pretty well!

Wow I LOVE this! It is so vivid and amazing! Keep up this excellent work! ~David~

Wow! You are definitely getting better!~

Another good haiku...hehe. Well done. ^_^

Hello. I like your haiku (too)! I'm feeling the passion :D
thanks for the review.
lin