I thought that this was an extremly good story. When i read this i relly, and i mean really felt lie i was the person, the boy with this pain and hurt that he was feeling. One thing that i didnt like was when the author wrote "both of his wrists sliced open" I know its discriptive, but i think that the word "sliced" is wrong. When i read it i felt really upset. I think thats what the author wanted us to feel but maybe he/she could of used a different word, like cut not slice. Thats just my opinion.
Overall it was a very good story and i really appreciate it. I hope you right more ScyStorm.